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Karaoke Showcase
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DannyG2006
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Date Submitted: |
2014-12-18 [Archive Date: 2015-03-18] |
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Rock'n'Roll |
Original Artist: |
Journey |
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Overall Rank: |
Rank Unavailable |
Total Comments: |
1 |
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Suzanne Lanoue (Total comments: 4327 Submissions: 478) |
Fri, Dec 26th, 2014
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Hi, Danny! You asked for critique, so that's what I'm giving you. Hope you don't mind. I don't know the song, but I can tell it's too high for you. You're barely hitting those high notes. If you really think you can sing them, then aim higher because right now it's very flat all the way through. Otherwise, I'd focus on lower songs. Usually when we're out of tune, it's due to lack of breath support, though. Take bigger breaths, open your mouth much wider when you sing, and then -this is important!- make sure you use the breath for each entire phrase. If you use too much at the beginning of the phrase, you'll run out of air long before you reach the end. Opening the mouth wider lets the sound out better, too. You have good forward focus and great diction - I can really understand the words. Just use the breath better and the rest should be fine. Unless it really is just too high for you, in which case, don't push it so much and sing something lower. :) |
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