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Neo (Total comments: 39 Submissions: 6) |
Fri, Sep 14th, 2012
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Wow I'm shocked!! I had no idea you two were not still together. Anyway I am really enjoying this performance from you!! What better way to inspire a song than with a real life situation!! Great job!! |
Reply: Yeah, it was fun to write. ;) I JUST found out that you had submitted songs again, but they're already archived!! DArnit... resubmit! |
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Nougat (Total comments: 17 Submissions: 14) |
Fri, May 4th, 2012
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I really dig your guitar playing. Perhaps a guitar duet in the future? I really enjoyed this one. You have a really classically pretty voice but you allowed the bitterness and the anger to ring through. |
Reply: guitar duet?? lol That would require some careful consideration. Thanks! :) |
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Sequenzzer (Total comments: 83 Submissions: 29) |
Sat, Apr 28th, 2012
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Very interesting! Guitar riffs are cool. Lots o' anger in this one! Lemme guess,you wrote this one after the "other" dude left the toilet seat up? |
Reply: If leaving the toilet seat up was the worst thing he did, I wouldn't have been nearly so angry. ;) Thanks! |
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Mark Cheetah (Total comments: 766 Submissions: 73) |
Fri, Apr 27th, 2012
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Oh, cool... I get to critique this one! It's an original, so right off the bat, you get points for that. At first, I thought the chord progression was going to be the "predictable" C - A minor - F - G arrangement, but it's not. Good call! Extra points for that too. However, the song becomes repetitive. About halfway through, it becomes evident that it's just going to "keep repeating itself." You should have inserted a bridge in there. So that'll shave off some points. Also, it's an easy song to sing. There's no "wow factor." I would've liked to hear you hit some highs and use more of that range you have. Points shaved. Cool lyrics... points added. Guitar playing is tight & solid... points added. Overall, pretty good job. Adding a bridge part to change up the melody would've made a big difference. |
Reply: lol thank you! That's very helpful feedback! It was my first song-writing attempt. Yeah, I noticed that it gets 'predictable', maybe I'll work on it more later and see if I can put a bridge in to break it up some. I do realize it's pretty simplistic, but was soo fun! Satisfying! ;) My vocals don't suit it very well. :/ Thanks so much! |
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Suzanne Lanoue (Total comments: 2232 Submissions: 158) |
Thu, Apr 26th, 2012
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Fantastic singing!!! Sounds great. I don't have any exes (well, not any that count, since they were way back in high school like 35 years ago :) |
Reply: lol thank you for listening and being brave enough to leave a comment! ;) |
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